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Three Wishes  [13+]
The genie always wins! LOL
by 🌕 HuntersMoon
Review of Three Wishes  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This one showed up on random reads and ... well ... Ha ha ha ha ha!

So here's how it went for me - I saw the title and thought it'd be something funny. Then I started reading and it began all serious. So I thought, "Oh, what's the twist going to be?" (I knew from the title that the Genie had to win) and then the twist came in the very last line and *Rolling* Great poem, to keep the reader guessing like that.

The tone is that of an old-fashioned poetic narrative, which adds to the feel of the whole thing. Great rhyming!

Suggestions: Please pick two more genres - 'animal' could be one ... ?

Thanks for the chuckle!
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