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 Of you, All I Need  [E]
Of you all I need is...
by SeanFear
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You've captured the emotion really well in these lyrics. The imagery is strong and the feelings come through powerfully. I love the refrain and the last verse.

In some places, I notice some 'poetic licence' with grammar, but that's only because I'm a school ma'am - it doesn't matter otherwise since this is meant to be sung. The word 'worried' somehow didn't seem to fit the rest of the flow.

Thanks for sharing this!
Write On!


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