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 | Hawaiian Breeze  [E] Hawaiian Breeze is my favorite scent from Glade.  |
| (3.5)  Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army" !Hallo! This one showed up on Random Review. The title made me think of nature, but in the brief description you clarify what the poem is going to be about. I like the layout of the poem, the font you've chosen, the size, line-spacing and centering. I also appreciate the notes at the end. The poem gives the message of your liking of this scent. A couple of things did confuse me, though. I wonder why some of the words begin with capital letters - are they brand names of other scents? Or do you want to emphasize them? Also, why is it spelled 'scent' sometimes and 'sent' sometimes -- is that on purpose? Suggestions: You've repeated the word 'pleasant' in the first verse, would you like to change one of those? The middle two lines of the second verse tripped my reading a bit. Maybe you'd like to look at those again. Thanks for sharing this poem. Write On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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