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 Now as I Tend My Garden  [E]
A celebration of Motherhood
by Roari ∞
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Oh, I'm so glad this one showed up on random reads! It's absolutely perfect. I was smiling throughout.

The rhyme scheme and verse structure work beautifully to bring out your message, and the title, brief description and genres are apt.

The poem basically tells of family time in the garden - but it also speaks more deeply about what it means to be a parent and create memorable experiences for a child. superb job on that *ThumbsUpR*.

My suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, center, color and maybe italics.

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