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 Underneath.  [E]
You can't be what you're not.
by BlueDight
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hallo! This one showed up on Random Reads.

You've expressed what several of your readers must be feeling. One can't hide one's true self, no matter how we try. Actually, while you express it as a minus point, I think it's a good thing that everyone's true colors must show at some time!

The title, brief description and genres work for the poem. The verse structure and words chosen bring the message through. My suggestion would be to perhaps try some WritingML like font, center and italcis.

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