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Where Did I Go?  [E]
An elderly lady comes to terms with her aging face, thanks to her granddaughter.
by Cubby
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What a lovely poem about a woman realizing 'where' the years have gone! I like everything about it - the cover picture, the title, the brief description, genres and the poem itself.

You give a message that it's important for all those in this phase of life to heed. The verse structure and words work well to convey the emotions and the conclusion.

My suggestion would be for WritingML, like font, center, italics and maybe color.

Also -- when I read the title and saw the cover photo, I thought maybe the child resembles the grandma, and she realises that her own child and then grandchild have her features -- which is where she has 'gone' -- into their upbringing, their values and their lives. While your poem gives the message in a different way, this is what the title and cover pic said to me.

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!
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