The logline with the warning "Read at your own risk." is very ominous. Your poetry is definitely raw and the XGC rating seems appropriate for the content also.
At first, I wondered if you had misunderstood the type choice since you labeled this as poetry and it looks like prose at first. Once I read it, I could see the rhythm within and it became clear that this is a sort of street/rap/angry poetry that does not follow the rigid rules of poetry, but instead draws the reader in with extreme imagery and keeps the reader going with the rhythm. \

Good stuff. Keep writing.