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 Breaking News  [13+]
My attempt to break people from the manipulation of these giant media corporations.
by MyMindInRhyme
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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WOW! *Shock*

How did you do that? I mean -- fourteen words! That's what this poem is, fourteen words! I counted! You have rhyme, rhythm, a story an opinion and a message -- all in fourteen words! Brilliant!

The title, brief description and genres all work well. Maybe you'd like to put in a cover picture.

Suggestion - Writing ML. Center, font, size and bold.

Talk about a little verse packing a punch! Wow again.

Write On!

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