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 Spirits Snicker  [13+]
Alcoholism
by MyMindInRhyme
Review of Spirits Snicker  
Review by Annette
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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This poem about alcoholism is very well written. It captures how fleeting and hard to pinpoint this sickness really is. There are parts when there is a lot of snickering and it all feels like fun and games. Of course, the deterioration that alcoholism brings is also prominently mentioned in this poem, as it should be. The health and behavior changes are all listed in excruciating detail. Each one more scary than the next.

This should be printed up on the wall of places where people go to stop drinking. And in bars, where people go to drink.

Annette
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