Yes, you're right, the outdoors
Is really inviting
And to sleep under the stars
Is pretty exciting.

But there are disadvantages
Like the crawlies that creep
And those that bite and sting
Interrupting your sleep!

What if it rains
Or starts to snow?
Then into the house
You just have to go!

I thought that this is what
The latter verses would say
But you've ended the poem
In a much warmer, sweeter way.

I love the fuzzy feeling
Of the last four lines
Yes, family is the greatest gift
With happiness sublime.

The poem is perfect as it is
And I appreciate the italics
At the end, explaining the form
Since I don't know much of iambics.

But there is a suggestion
If you'd like one from me
Please use WritingML
Like font, color, center for symmetry.

This would make the layout
Reflect the joy of your message
And give an immediate impact
When the reader clicks on the page.

Thanks for sharing this
It made me smile for sure
And Happy WdC Anniversary
Here's to many more!