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Did you use automatic translation to turn this from some language into English? The first sentence: "On the off chance that you are not before your obstruction, you won't get any idea and you won't make benefits." doesn't make complete sense. I can tell that the text is about promoting mobile apps and their sales, but it's convoluted and unclear. You might hire someone who knows your language and English to get this text translated a little smoother and who can help you to write it better yourself next time.

If you posted this here for promotional purposes, I don't think this is the right venue for that.

Best of luck with your writing and mobile apps.

Annette
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