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 Make A Choice  [E]
A divided heart telling that a choice needs to be made
by Fallen Angel
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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This poem echoes what many people feel in situations where they have to choose and are stuck which way to go.
The title, genres and brief description work. The verse structure and words chosen give the message.

My suggestion would be for the first two lines. You rhyme 'voice' and 'choice'. This led me to expect rhyming couplets through the poem and then you went into free verse. This tripped my first reading a bit.

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