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Review of Baking  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I should've known clicking on this would make me hungry. *RollEyes*

Well, I guess that means your poem is evocative and did what it needed to do! *Greetl* You bring out the variety of foods that are baked and the feeling while they're in the oven!

In the brief description, you give the type of poem. I'd have liked a small note to explain this form as I am not very good with forms of poetry. Also, in the brief description, you have some room to add more emotion.

Um -- bake on. But next time, share with us, too! *Laugh*
Gifted by Secret Squirrel, created by Kiya. Thank you!

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