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 Universal Energy  [E]
A poem depicting different energies within universal energy.
by Vaughan Jones - ONE Scribe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Talk about expressing a scientific concept in a lyrical manner! Wow!

The title and brief description work well. Would you like to add a cover photo? And in the genres, the last one, I think you mean 'contest entry'. Maybe some WritingML, like font, linespace, center and even color.

I absolutely love the poem The rhyme scheme and verse structure work for your message. The idea of everything being life, and part of nature, is so beautiful. The verse about Mother Earth had me *Smile*.

Twelve lines of thought-provoking poetry about a scientific concept — doesn't get better than that!

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