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Hello tarasankar

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I am reviewing your poem An Appeal to You.

The title is nicely chosen. The message which this wants to convey is good but I need you need to work upon your grammatical errors. You can use 'grammarly' for this. It is a good site.

I would suggest you to use some writing ml like colour, centralise and bold features.

The imagery and expression is good.
Correction- For several times.
Test everything is fine and very well written.

You don't have to mention you name and title in the poem. It will be displayed above it automatically.

Remember, these are my views and opinion. You are free to use your own thoughts. Welcome again to this community.

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