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Home is and so is my heart  [E]
Home is where the heart is
by Chibithulu (Alyssa)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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You've built this poem up very well, with one thought flowing into the other and finally coming a full circle. Great job! *ThumbsUpL* It's just 12 lines, with very simple language and yet is profound. It's about what's important in life and what a person should notice and be grateful for.

I have no suggestions for the poem itself. Would you like to add a cover photo, and for the text, some WritingMl like font, size, center, italics and maybe color?

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem!
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