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Review #4618675
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 Pickle Lip Balm  [E]
An ad written for the Marketing Muse
by Zhen
Review of Pickle Lip Balm  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Write On, Write More
Tickle your marketing muse galore
Why is there just one?
There should be a dozen,
— it's so much fun!

Please change the font to 'comic'
So that it looks more chic
Centralize it, add some color
Oh, and talk about its flavor.

You've talked about all the deals
I need more details of the feels
Is it moist? Is it tasty?
Nine lines, ended your rhyme too hasty.

What's your true love going to say
When you go the Pickle Balm way?
How does it increase the attraction?
Let me know of that reaction!

I think basically what I'm uttering
(I'll stop hinting and muttering)
Is that I enjoyed this a lot
So I want more than what I got!

*Sun* Write On! *Sun*
- Sonali

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