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Superpower

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Imagine you dream about being a superheroine who travels from galaxy to galaxy...
by Sophie Malloy

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Review of Superpower

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

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Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

Please note - any suggestions are purely my personal opinion.
Feel free to use them or ignore them!

Hallo!
I saw this poll on the newsfeed.

It's interesting the way you've thought through and arranged the powers. That's quite a fascinating analysis. It's also intriguing the way people have voted so far (I'm reviewing this when you have four votes). The choice that's in first place currently speaks for the way society is moving.

Now that you've got it going with these options, it's fine. Else I would've suggested combining the two you've got as 'physical' and adding another option to do with actually NOT having any special power, just being yourself and seeing where that gets you!

Power On!