I understand that you have published books on Amazon already. I did follow up on your Instagram handle to see what you have. I did not read the excerpts there, but saw you have a whole little writing empire going on already. Great!

Intriguing beginning to this story. The plot seems to be simple, but you lay it on thicker with every sentence. I would read on after this page for sure. Your writing is clear and the whole story develops logically in front of me. If this is published, you might add the link to the Amazon book to this item. You can find out how to do that here: "Writing.Com 101"  "Advertising Published Works"