This little poem does get the mind going. I read it several times, and while I do not presume to know what you were exactly saying, I have a feeling of understanding what the general meaning is. The lines are short, but they each have a lot of meaning. I like the first line because "no beauty," then that really takes a lot of pressure off. External beauty is so fleeting. I don't think you meant internal beauty, but that is why I am also saying that I don't know what you are saying exactly. You could mean internal beauty. The beauty in giving, sacrificing, demonstrating the essence of love.