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First of all, I welcome you to this wonderful site. I am reviewing your piece 'Absence'. These are just my thoughts and opinions. You are free to either use them or discard them.

Title:
The title is self expressing and suitable.

Rhythm and Flow:
You have created a nice flow but the first line seems a bit odd. You may read aloud once to know how it feels.

Opinion and Thoughts:
The poem has a message that in absence too there is love. I love the way it has been said.

Keep Writing!

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Lurie Park
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