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 Dreaming in Lotus Land  [GC]
Heartache leads to a contemplation of Time and Human Suffering
by TLaHomme
Review by Vaishali
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Rated: GC | (4.5)
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First of all, I welcome you to this wonderful site. I am reviewing your piece ' Dreaming in Lotus Land'. These are just my thoughts and opinions. You are free to either use them or discard them.

Title:
The title is apt.

Rhythm and Flow:
The flow is nice. It is conveying and moving like a story.

Opinion and Thoughts:
I do not if this is religious or not but when you used the name 'Siddhartha', I felt like it was for Buddha. Though, I am not a Buddhist. His teachings are great and realistic. The poem has all the way long a beautiful message contained in it.

Keep Writing!

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