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First of all, I welcome you to this wonderful site. I am reviewing your piece 'Blooming'. These are just my thoughts and opinions. You are free to either use them or discard them.

The topic you choose is amazing.
This poem is a free verse. Flow is not as good as engaging. The imagery you used is thought- provoking. Emotions are well displayed. You can add some writing ml like colour, centre, etc.
Remember to leave lines or to change stanzas. This enhances the readibility of your poem.

Keep Writing!

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Lurie Park
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