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The Park  [E]
I'm about to write a poem about being here in the park. Give me a few minutes.
by Humble_Poet PNG
Review of The Park  
Review by Vaishali
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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First of all, I welcome you to this wonderful site. I am reviewing your piece 'The Park'. These are just my thoughts and opinions. You are free to either use them or discard them.

A short poem but an interesting one! I am fan of rhymed poems and your rhymes are perfect. The flow is nothing but engaging and easy to follow. The things experienced in the park and the lady love you got is so refreshing.

Keep Writing!

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Lurie Park
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