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I'm reviewing this for "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle "  because your post was just before mine. I'm not a professional reviewer and these are only my opinions. Take what you find useful. Ignore the rest. All comments are given with love and respect for you and your writing. *Smile*

*CheckB* My overall impression and emotional impact: The first stanza immediately got my attention. The different font colors used with each stanza emphasizes the poem's title, while showing the romantic emotions.


*CheckO* Form, format, rhyme and meter: The poem follows the form and looks good on the page. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the active descriptions and emotions forward at a good pace.


*CheckY* Grammar, spelling and mechanics: I found no technical problems.


*CheckR* Suggestions for improvement: I have no suggestions.


*CheckG* My favorite parts: The last line is my favorite, because it ties the poem together.


Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review and I hope you find my comments helpful. Remember, they are only my opinion. You're the writer and know what's best for you. *Wink*

Good luck with the rest of "CLOSED: Merit Badges for Fun Raffle " ! *Shamrock* You got this! You can do it! I believe in you! *Hug*


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