That person who moves to be next door to the Chocolate Baker is a person after my heart. I firmly believe that chocolate is the fifth food group and sorely under represented on food charts.

I liked your little poem for the story it told. It was refreshing to read about someone being attracted to a skill (baking) instead of something romantic.

A couple of suggestions:

In your intro line below the title, you write: A person that loves. I would say a person 'who' loves.

Now the Chocolate Baker, a grand lady[comma] is my neighbor.

If you go to the left side bar and click on My Account and then go to My Activity and choose My Achievements, you will find a couple of neat surprises in your email inbox.