Welcome to WdC from the "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Hi Rose Lee, This is a fantastic poem. The tone is both full of joy and anxiety at the same time. The contrast grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is enjoying a very loving relationship in their life but is still worrying about the future and what might happen. I think that the speaker has to just relax. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I love this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
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