Hi Lintrinda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and desire. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. In the poem, someone is in love with another person who is trying to deny their love. I am hoping that the speaker will find a way to make the person they love to admit their feelings. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.