Hi, my name is Anna Marie Carlson and I am doing this review for you for my "Rising Stars" class.

It sounds like you have been looking at the computer screen to long, and this is the reason why you are feeling withdrawn. I see how this can be done; I find that my eyes get blurry from looking at the screen and start seeing the print as being double; sometimes the screen gets to be too bright. I can be writing a long story and get a tad bit frustrated, which leads me to be a tad bit depressed.

People can tend to be a bit aggressive with their comments. This has happened to me at times when my passion for singing is brought down a bit by someone saying that I will never make it in singing. Yes, I can understand how you feel. Don't get discouraged by what others say. If you listen to them all the time, you won't know how you will do in pursuing your dream. Don't give up on your writing; believe in yourself and continue to write. The more you write, the more at ease you'll become.

I hope that this helps.

Anna Marie Carlson

I am going to send you 100 Gift Points for expressing the way you feel.