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 If The World is Made of Gold  [E]
If The World is Made of Gold, by T. J. Shemaly
by SeanFear
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, SeanFear , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "If The World is Made of Gold because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and inspiration forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the questions this poem ask, because they are thought provoking and inspiring.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this inspiring poem, because of the questions.

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