Hi, HollyMerry , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "Primrose, flower of early youth"  because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog" .

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and the emotions of joy forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: These are my favorite lines, because of the rhyme on birth and earth.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of way it expressed the emotion of joy.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .