Hi, kevint, I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "Invalid Item"  because sin city is tomorrow's prompt for "Space Blog" 

First Thoughts: The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative forward at a good pace. The rhythm makes this poem easy to read aloud.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the first two lines because of the rhyme on Lynn and sin.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because I live in Las Vegas, Nevada. Las Vegas is sometimes called "Sin City".




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .