#10


U R obviously a child of the smart phone age.

As free verse, this has impact. Might be clearer if divided into separate lines.

Not sure why Pain and Hurt are capitalized, but it draws attention to those words. Spelling: "in tens fold" better as just "tenfold"  .

For a 275 character monologue I have to write a 250 word review to get credit.



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