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 A Happy Little Poem  [E]
Written for the Poem Per Day Challenge, Jan. 10th, 2005
by Cynaemon
In affiliation with Space Blog Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Cynaemon , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am review "A Happy Little Poem because I discovered it in the prompt for "Space Blog.

First Thoughts: The first stanza establishes the form, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and emotion of happiness forward at a good pace.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: The first stanza is my favorite because of the rhyme on hair and fair.

Final Thought: I am giving this well written poem a 5.0, because of the way it expresses the emotion of happiness.

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