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| (5.0)| When I saw the title, I thought the poem would be a cute one with questions like 'why is the sky blue?' Instead, I found a very deep, searching poem asking relevant questions and then coming to a great conclusion. The structure and words chosen work well for your message. The title, as I've said, made me expect something else. The brief description works. You've picked one genre, maybe you'd like to pick two more. You might also want to work with some Writing ML like font, size, center and line-spacing to enhance the look of the piece. The questions you ask provoke thought. My favourite bit is about grasping more and getting less, that's so pithy and such a wonderful insight. I also like how the solution of love flows in with the questions you ask. Overall, a wonderful, inspiring poem. Write On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 08/27/2021 @ 8:22am EDT