First Thoughts: The poem follows the free verse form and looks good on the page. The rhythm flows easily from line to line while moving the emotions of love forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the picture this poem presents of a loving and caring father.
Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem, because of the subject.
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