A foggy day [E] An autumnal poem about fog rising in the countryside |
A pleasant hour, HollyMerry MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSIONI'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. and I'm here to give you again a review to celebrate WDC Anniversary!. Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. I've just found again this beautiful poem of yours and i think its about nature, The given title reminds me of winter of course, that Christmas is coming, the words you used are creative and well chosen, because they creates a good imagery,example of these are: Swell like blue fungus above the trees. Amongst the skeletons of summer thistles Of a fallen army rising from their graves. They are beautiful, and it creates something a mystery of nature. It flows naturally and smoothly. MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION : I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it. I am looking forward to read more of your works again. Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. Please visit my recognized WDC Celebrity Authors Portfolio this Month and Newbies Picked featured in "Welcome to my Garden of Creativity " - Anni Pon & Jeannie
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