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 | Escape Claws  [ASR] An unlikely escape from a lost world island.  |
| (5.0)  This review contains some of my brief thoughts about your poem. Hi Don! Happy Site Anniversary Week to you!  Wow! I am in awe at the poem which you wrote from the simple prompt words, wind blown, statue, fields, wreath, and bottle. Seriously! How were you able to write such a deep, adventurous, fantasy story poem from that! I'm sure others might have ventured into the message in a bottle line - and, by the way, I like how you casually slipped something about that in, but you took your poem to a whole other level! I liked the addition of prehistoric pterodactyls. They added a captivating excitement to your story poem, especially when it seemed the hero would fall from one of their grips. It was fun to read from the beginning to the end. The first two lines made me want to continue reading. "Once on a wind blown Pacific plateau, /held in a land that retained long ago. Your ending made me think of a, 'Happily ever after' story. Nice work!    -Write on! 
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