Hi, k.hbey! Welcome to WDC! I came across your article in the "Read a Newbie" page, and became interested because I love ancient Egyptian history as well.

I noticed that you switch back and forth between spellings: "Tutankhamun" and "Tutankhamen". Are both acceptable? If so, maybe make a reference to that.

Also, be careful with your facts, especially those that can be easily checked. Howard Carter died in March 1939 in England, over 16 years after he entered the tomb. I know the allure and mystique of the curse of the mummy's tomb has a macabre draw to it, but watch out for those pesky facts.

I have a question about this sentence:

"The researchers found many other prooves which can easily..."

Did you mean that researchers found much more evidence...?

Write on!
Alex


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