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 The Stampede, 300 Words  [E]
Daily Flash Fiction Entry, Prompt: "I need to borrow some money."
by E.O. McLendon
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
E.O. McLendon

This is a nice and rather hilarious short story written so perfectly in 300 words. As a reader the opening and the way all are ready to enjoy and manage the celebration. The side gate and the animals and ducks crashing the party did leave readers grasping in disbelief. I did like your overall robust story that is indeed easy to follow..sindbad

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