Hello Brom21, I reviewed this a minute ago but forgot something so I deleted it I'm resubmitting it. This little story draws readers in as we see these two people interacting and sharing a very special brew. Yet that's not all something happens and we're not sure how that's going to turn out. We see magical creatures-- dragon a chariot, and a phoenix too. Curious, we must read on to see how things turn out. Nice tension built and story questions raised. All ends well, quite an adventure for the unsuspecting one. Good job on this. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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