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My Heart - My First Poem Ever  [E]
This is the foundation of my career as a poet. Heartbreak emotion needed this release.
by Jay O'Toole
Review by ~SilverMoon~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Jay O'Toole,


I noticed this poem.in your port.

It's short but bittersweet. There's the joy of love so much it almost hurts, but then reality changes it.

The person tucks his love away into his pocket.

Very expressive piece. It's a topic that almost anyone can relate to.

What's also impressive is how you g this person was that wrote it. Truly romantic and expressive.

Well done .

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