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 Star  [E]
Flash Fiction 5-23-20 W/C 299
by QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham
Review of Star  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
QueenNormaJean isNancyDrew4now

This a nice and yet story that will be known to end with indecisive ending. Mary waiting for so long to get a star tattoo and Jane was rather indecisive. However Jane's mandate prevailed as both were close teenage friends. In teenage years friendship matters. This is indeed a nice and eloquent message...sindbad



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