Hello Marvelous Friend,

This is the review of your Rising Stars September task, "Writing Poetry" .

General Comments:
I really enjoyed each of these great poems!! You really embraced this lesson and your efforts and talent shine through!

Technical Stuff:
Your Haiku is perfect! The syllable count is spot-on.

The Acrostic is nice and I love the phrase you selected: Fall Leaves - especially with fall right around the corner!

The first line made me stumble a bit because I read it without pausing so it didn't make sense when I read it the first time. Maybe a dash or comma after the word around would help.

Your Cinquain was good and I enjoyed the topic. The only thing that caught my attention with this is that line 4 has seven syllables, not 8.


Conclusion:

Three great poems, overall! Wonderful job!

Kindest Regards, Lilli

***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .