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 Birthday poem  [E]
A poem to my wife on her birthday
by Tinotenda Rodney Alfaneti
Review of Birthday poem  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I don't recognize all of the words. Are they from a language other than English? if they are you might make the reader aware of that in a footnote and perhaps give a rough translation. Language aside I understood enough to realize this is a poem about a rare and beautiful love.

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