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 I'm Lonly Now.  [13+]
Shadow poetry Contest
by Mary Ann MCPhedran
Review of I'm Lonly Now.  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi
Mary Ann MCPhedran/fearless

This is a nice and rather sad poem. I am lonely now captures the inherent sadness and makes reader realise on punitive action should be taken for the person who left you so vulnerable and exposed. Overall the poem leaves a deep impression specially the ending with shadow of myself...sindbad

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