Hello Vaishali,

This is the review of your Rising Stars September task, "Writing Poetry" .

General Comments:

Haiku:
How cute!! To keep this purely about nature, perhaps change Lilli to Lily, which is the spelling for the flower. The second line should have 7 syllables, currently has 6. Adding 'the' to that line would quickly fix that (...in the winds).

Acrostic:
I especially like your Uncertainty poem! Very nicely executed! This poem shows that you understood the lesson in that the content of the poem should reflect the meaning of the word. Great job.

Your second poem, Alarm, was fun and cute!

Cinquain:

Well done and a great poem. Syllable counts are good and the execution is perfect!


Conclusion:
You're doing GREAT! Keep writing.

Kindest Regards, Lilli

***Disclaimer***
The comments herein are just my humble opinions. Use whatever is useful; discard the rest. I'm not an editor, proof-reader, or any of the like. When I read and review, I am reading as a 'reader', to be entertained. You know your work better than anyone else! If I make a suggestion or a comment, it is meant in the spirit of 'helping' and I welcome the same when people review my work.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .