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April Fools  [13+]
Some people just don't appreciate them.
by Seuzz
Review of April Fools  
Review by Beholden
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I like this. You had me waiting to hear about the joke on Todd and then there's all this stuff about their departments and the people who work in them. It's as though I fell for it as hard as did Clarice. But that's okay, I can take a joke.

The dialogue is very natural and believable. And that's about it, there being very little narrative or description in the piece. Thinking about it, however, I know exactly what you mean by a "pub-style burger and onion rings."

To sum up, it's an amusing and entertaining little tale and I have no hesitation in giving it five stars. But I would suggest you add to the single genre listed in its description. Many readers gather as much info as they can about a piece before deciding to read and the more we can give them, the more likely it is that we'll hook them.

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