*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4630124
Review #4630124
Viewing a review of:
 A Mind-blowing Experience  [E]
Something that happened unexpectedly.
by StoryBob
Review by Beholden
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
What a wonderful experience. And one that I can empathise with, having at one time in my life been an aspiring painter. Except I never sold anything - if someone liked what I'd done, I would give it to them.

But anyway, it's clear I'll not find any mistakes in your writing, in spite of your protestations of fallibility. I'm sure you weren't a proofreader for nothing. But I had to come a long way to find the prose I was looking for. Sure, I read a few poems along the way but I really wanted prose if I was going to review anything. And, on this piece's evidence, you know how to write, so I wonder why no fiction. Have you tried it at all?

But, if you really don't want to give it a go, you should write a few more pieces like this one - personal anecdotes and memories, in other words. I learned from a very good friend of a few years back that we old uns have a wealth of experience in our heads that others love to hear about. Certainly worth thinking about, you know.

Anyway, thanks for sharing that wonderful story. It is a pleasure to read.

*Vine2**Burstp* Celebrating the Letter S *Burstb**Vine1*
the
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
Review Raid
*Vine2**Burstp**Burstb**Vine1*


~Click here to join a fun reviewing group~


Small photo

Beholden


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 09/19/2021 @ 2:28pm EDT
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4630124