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Running Away  [13+]
Love, pride, and humility...
by IceSkatingSugarCube
Review of Running Away  
Review by Beholden
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I like this. It's short (no doubt thanks to the contest requirements), to the point and contains considerable depth in very few words. The last sentence says it all. Love is the reason for the need for forgiveness and it turns a fight into a race to apologise first. Truly wonderful!

It takes considerable talent to write a full story in so few words. But it's worth doing because it teaches us what is essential and what can be omitted without harming the plot. You have made a really good job of it in this piece. Applause.


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